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What Alexander Pope thinks of my poetry:

10 Mar

Where-e’er you find “the cooling western breeze,”

In the next line, it “whispers through the trees;”

If crystal streams “with pleasing murmurs creep,”

The reader’s threatened (not in vain) with “sleep.”

 

Point taken, dead sir. Rigidity is my armor now, but soon I will write un-shielded.

Mourning Dove

10 Mar
me. 1st draft.  Today.                                          
I read that the dove is closely related to the pigeon... I just don't see it

I read that the dove is closely related to the pigeon… I just don’t see it

Another beautiful morning in the Mid-Columbidae

Another beautiful morning in the Mid-Columbidae Basin.

Hey little friend

Joining my daybreak route?

You’ve landed in my path six times now.

Please watch out!

 

Four feathery ounces again lead the way.

Good morning to you! What are you trying to say?

I see another pair on the lawn across the street

Why are you alone? Is that why you don’t tweet?

You’re solo, I’m on my own…

Hey baby… funny we should meet.

 

My mind

On more mystical days

Seeks a message

In this avian display.

A Christian dove?

(please no, tiny bird-

you are not so unworthy a muse).

Or a wild Ishtar, playing a pawn in a mischievous ruse?

 

If there’s a message you are sending, it hasn’t been received

but maybe things are less and more than otherwise perceived.

 

For now I’ll just thank you for the company

worth more than a sign towards path or track.

The seas of pavement are easier to navigate

simply knowing that fauna has ‘got my back.’

Column Builders

8 Mar
No less practical now than when new.

No more practical now than when new.

by Me. 1st draft. 3/8/13

 

Through memory’s ruins runs a frazzled mind.

It dodges and ducks from dreams left behind.

Each pillar unfinished- jagged monuments to error

White wears to waste, revealing brown shades of disrepair.

 

But build again! You are bound to find

the evasive answers hidden from all mankind.

Nevermind that the question is rarely asked

and when it is, focus doesn’t last.

 

Who has a flute to spare?

My glass has run low.

Replenish the music of a life

regulated by flow.

 

Stumble to a column

Embrace what has already been tried.

Bang your head against it –That’s it

(if it doesn’t hurt then you haven’t really tried).

A billion dead men have done it, seeking the same result as you.

Just build upon their rubble- history ain’t easy to eschew.

 

Take these plans, repeat and rewind.

Process of Elimination suggests you’ll find

The instruction manual is incomplete

(with lines for help, though, it is replete).

 

Soon, speed dial #1 admits the failure of sheer Will

until you find yourself only muttering

“What the Hell was I trying to build?”

 

But build again! You are bound to find

another hope by the end of the line

Nevermind that clarity is now sputtering

The inquiry soon relegated to embarrassed stuttering.

 

Who has a flute to spare?

My glass has run low.

Replenish the music of lives

Regulated by flow.

 

This time, dig below foundation

You’ll have nothing to stand on

But for your own exploration.

Ignore the flourish of fluted lines-

We aren’t there yet. Restarting takes time.

May your vision be not obscured.

Only then will centuries of pestilence be cured.

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I suppose I’m not a parapet-

certainly not made of stone.

But the keystone I will strive to whet

on a truth that serves to hone.

In Memory of…

7 Mar

Lest you read my last article regarding Arlene’s Flowers and think that the Tri-Cities is a backwater of ignorance, I feel that this obituary from our daily newspaper is beautiful and full of honesty. I’m not sure if it is poetry or prose but it is art.

 

GILBERT JAY ‘GJ’ PITKOFF, Jr.

3-21-90 / 2-27-13

A kaleidoscope of sounds. Hard to contain with door or fence.

He was a rocker and a head banger. From below he was dangerous. Cats disappeared in his presence and dogs respected him to survive. He was a wanderer and a kitchen’s worst nightmare. A daredevil who turned the ordinary into extreme. A Stunt man that liked to bounce and crash through.

ImageHe was antischedule. He was a sleep fighter and a nonarouser. He was juicy. He liked looking out the window at the leaves in the breeze. He loved movement. He went through life unafraid. His guardian angels often worked overtime. 

G was liked by a bunch that “got it” and he touched quite a few. He was a special kindred spirit hard for a body to contain. At best he was the “Budster.” A unique brew.  I feel lucky that I knew him.

He taught me unconditional love. He never spoke a word but I will miss our conversations. I thank the many who cared for and cared about him. I know we will meet up again in a better place. But until then, Gj, you will surely be missed.

The Dad

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Thank you, ‘The Dad,’ for this.  I hope I’m not out of line for transcribing an obituary; I just think this is the type of expression that should be shared.